Bromance
Sep 18, 2012
Graduate / Describe your potential contributions to the class if you were to receive admission [3]
1 please attetion to the single and plural forms of the word to maintai the symmetry of sentence.
Out of many unique feature of the school -----------"features"
The school enriches its student with different skill , experiences -----------"plans" is better
I will clearly and smartly explain the public policies, strategies and plan of Ethiopia to the school society on the experiences sharing forum
2 I am also familiarized on different meeting and training ----------------familiarlized is the past tense form of the verb "familiarlize" i suggest u to replace it with phrease "be familiar with" or "feel at home in "
3 In additionto this,
4 The school's foot ball clubs also will get one best player from east Africa.--------will also
for reference only.
1 please attetion to the single and plural forms of the word to maintai the symmetry of sentence.
Out of many unique feature of the school -----------"features"
The school enriches its student with different skill , experiences -----------"plans" is better
I will clearly and smartly explain the public policies, strategies and plan of Ethiopia to the school society on the experiences sharing forum
2 I am also familiarized on different meeting and training ----------------familiarlized is the past tense form of the verb "familiarlize" i suggest u to replace it with phrease "be familiar with" or "feel at home in "
3 In addition
4 The school's foot ball clubs also will get one best player from east Africa.--------will also
for reference only.