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Posts by Bromance
Joined: Sep 18, 2012
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Bromance   
Sep 18, 2012
Graduate / Describe your potential contributions to the class if you were to receive admission [3]

1 please attetion to the single and plural forms of the word to maintai the symmetry of sentence.
Out of many unique feature of the school -----------"features"
The school enriches its student with different skill , experiences -----------"plans" is better
I will clearly and smartly explain the public policies, strategies and plan of Ethiopia to the school society on the experiences sharing forum
2 I am also familiarized on different meeting and training ----------------familiarlized is the past tense form of the verb "familiarlize" i suggest u to replace it with phrease "be familiar with" or "feel at home in "

3 In addition to this,
4 The school's foot ball clubs also will get one best player from east Africa.--------will also
for reference only.
Bromance   
Sep 18, 2012
Scholarship / scholarship - American Petroleum institute [2]

I think that I have the qualification to earn this scholarship, because I'm ambitious, hard working student and my goal is to be the best in my field--our is better

I also hope also to apply for summer internship because it'll help me buildingbuild my network and gaininggain experience.
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