Writing Feedback / IELTS: Task 2 Some people think that no one should be allowed to work after the age [6]

Hey pijiuwdw,

So far it's a pretty strong essay,


I think this phrase could be improved, to say "some people believe" or "some people are starting to believe"

Also I think it's "in a nutshell" and the last sentence "grow up better" could be simplified to just "grow."

Overall, looks good.

Undergraduate / Solar Panels; UVA College of Arts & Sciences [5]

This seems like an interesting essay, but I don't believe it was posted correctly.