Undergraduate / Stanford- Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you. [3]

I like it. Your personality shines through and your exactly like me!(:
"I know you will find a lot of new things about me as time goes by, so I'll let you find them yourself."

You already stated that they'll find a lot of new things the end is just repeating the beginning, if you decide to keep the sentence insert "out" before yourself

Undergraduate / 'growing up in a single parent household' - Critique UT Essay C [4]

just one little typo "within in school" to within my school, other than that its great