nithin1234
Oct 31, 2012
Undergraduate / Stanford Supplement; "Write a note to your future roommate"; four facts about me [8]
A day in shopping mall
During my vacation last month, I had been to the biggest mall in south India with my family.
It was a great experience, as it's the leading shopping mall. However, the price of the items were really heavy for a typical Indian. One best thing that I noticed, is the collection of fancy ornaments, because, the price of ornaments is rally good as compared with the normal stores. Overall the experience had been memorable for me.
In need to end the matter within 80 words, so i wrote it short. please check the grammetical and punctuation errors.
A day in shopping mall
During my vacation last month, I had been to the biggest mall in south India with my family.
It was a great experience, as it's the leading shopping mall. However, the price of the items were really heavy for a typical Indian. One best thing that I noticed, is the collection of fancy ornaments, because, the price of ornaments is rally good as compared with the normal stores. Overall the experience had been memorable for me.
In need to end the matter within 80 words, so i wrote it short. please check the grammetical and punctuation errors.