Essays / presentation about myself (but my English not so good) [7]

I wrote one and I want your opinion honestly and help me with the mistakes :$

Essays / presentation about myself (but my English not so good) [7]

Once upon a time there was a little princess her parents used to call her butterfly and actually this is one of the meanings of her name . This little girl is me . So that's why I'm going to talk about myself .

First, my name is yara . I'm 18 years old. I live in Taif . I'm student in Taif university. I grew up in a healthy family . My parents have 3 children . I'm the elder sister . So I think that's the reason to have joyful childhood days. After that , I'm going to talk about my appearance . I'm a little bit short . I have long curly black hair . I have round face and I wear some jewellery today.

At last I'm who I am and this is a little information about me and if you want to know more just ask me and I'll tell you..

This is the end of my presentation . Thank you for paying attention