Undergraduate / Stanford Supp: What matters to you and why?my brother was stuck on the father space [6]

i am also writing this essay and I suppose you are also from china.(i mean,you quote é-żĺ...„ĺŚ‚çˆś).Hope we can both go to stanford....here is my doubt:Do you really think it a good idea to try to move the AO, maye they are tired of these kind of emotional expression? but of course, maybe they are not.i consider essay a chance to show determination,future plan and talant.but after all ,it is a great essay.i maybe just too cynicism.good luck.