Undergraduate / I have set foot on all seven continets! personal and professional accomplishments [2]

I think this is written very well, and nothing pops out that sounds like it needs changed (:

Undergraduate / 'Google, Microsoft and Apple' - UC - Describe the world you come from [4]

I'm not sure about the word "precisely" in the second to last sentence. For some reason it sounds kinda funny, but i may be wrong (: