Graduate / Successful research career/ SOP for Grad School [6]

hey,
I think in the opening paragraph u said that Masters will help you accomplish your goals to become a researcher in your desired field. U should convey the desired field you want to research in.

Based on my knowledge a good sop should convey all this:
- It should put a little light on your academic and professional background. Which you have done in your case.
- It should convey the reason how you developed an interest in your field
- It should convey the reason why you want to pursue the masters
- And finally the reason for choosing the respective university
I am not from your background. For me the sop is too technical ( My opinion)
Regards,

Graduate / the reason of my inclination towards M.S in Computer Science:SOP for MS in CS [6]

Based on my knowledge a good sop should convey all this:
It should put a little light on your academic and professional background. Which you have done in your case.

It should convey the reason how you developed an interest in your field

It should convey the reason why you want to pursue the masters

And finally the reason for choosing the respective university

Graduate / the reason of my inclination towards M.S in Computer Science:SOP for MS in CS [6]

Your sop seems more of a personal history statement.
Try to convey the reason why you want to choose the said university.
Try to convince the reader to give you an admit

Graduate / the reason of my inclination towards M.S in Computer Science:SOP for MS in CS [6]

hey I think you should also reduce the size of your sop.
A normal sop should not be greater than 2 pages.
The university does not have lot of time to give to one sop.
They can give only max of 10 min to one application to try to convey only important points

Graduate / I want to discover a solution which improves human health; SOP - PhD(Chemical Eng) [5]

Based on my knowledge a good sop should convey all this:
- It should put a little light on your academic and professional background.
- It should convey the reason how you developed an interest in your field
- It should convey the reason why you want to pursue the masters
- And finally the reason for choosing the respective university

Undergraduate / "To stay where you are, keep running" - sop for MIS graduate admission [2]

Hey this seems to be similar to a sop sample I have already seen on the internet.
Please do not copy a sop from the internet the admission committee checks and verify for the content in the sop
If your sop is copied they might not consider your application so please be careful