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Dec 23, 2012
Graduate / Personal Statement for graduate studies / Help for paragraphing [4]
I'm not a native speaker and my writing is not good. I do Need ur help for this paragraph in my personal statement. ANY advice is greatly appreciated!!!!
Here it goes:
As operations went on, my repetitive duties as checking patients' personal information before operation, assisting doctors in preparing medical instruments and administering eye drops helped me win the trusts and encouragements from doctors. I indulged in a happiness of helping others and almost forgot the beginning warning.
(what I want to represent is that my performance as an intern earn doctors trust. But I cannot find a good way to include those details of my job in it, help!)
I'm not a native speaker and my writing is not good. I do Need ur help for this paragraph in my personal statement. ANY advice is greatly appreciated!!!!
Here it goes:
As operations went on, my repetitive duties as checking patients' personal information before operation, assisting doctors in preparing medical instruments and administering eye drops helped me win the trusts and encouragements from doctors. I indulged in a happiness of helping others and almost forgot the beginning warning.
(what I want to represent is that my performance as an intern earn doctors trust. But I cannot find a good way to include those details of my job in it, help!)