turtlefence
Dec 30, 2012
Undergraduate / Warm and inviting community ; HMC Supp: Why Harvey-Mudd? [3]
Using the word "core" might confuse the readers into thinking you're referring to the Common Core, which consists of math, science, and engineering courses. The curriculum is divided into three groups: Humanities/Social sciences, your major, and the Common Core, so referring to the curriculum as a whole would be more fitting. That isn't to say they won't know what you meant to write, but you should take it out just so that you don't seem like you've mixed up their terms.
I'd love to provide actual constructive feedback but I haven't started my first draft of this supplement, so I've been working on that lately. Good luck!
Now, I love math and science as much as the next HMC applicant, but I still enjoy learning about the social sciences and arts; this is why I really like the opportunity made possible by Harvey-Mudd's Core Curriculum.
Using the word "core" might confuse the readers into thinking you're referring to the Common Core, which consists of math, science, and engineering courses. The curriculum is divided into three groups: Humanities/Social sciences, your major, and the Common Core, so referring to the curriculum as a whole would be more fitting. That isn't to say they won't know what you meant to write, but you should take it out just so that you don't seem like you've mixed up their terms.
I'd love to provide actual constructive feedback but I haven't started my first draft of this supplement, so I've been working on that lately. Good luck!