Undergraduate / I'm a seventeen year old Chinese girl; INTRODUCTION OF MYSELF [9]

Thank u very much for the guides, thank u.

I am going to rewrite it and make some change. Here is another question confused me that I am not quite sure should I try to use some harder words in my writing. I had tried, but my teacher said sometimes the words may have the similar means but they might not very proper or just a mistake in the sentences .

So if I really want to practise my writing what should i do? keep using the easy words and easy sentences or some better ways to do?

Thank u a lot.

Undergraduate / I'm a seventeen year old Chinese girl; INTRODUCTION OF MYSELF [9]

Thank u , i think thats a great way to improve and i have started reading some easy books, but still confused by some word's different means. haha, but thank u.

i will keep reading them.

Undergraduate / I'm a seventeen year old Chinese girl; INTRODUCTION OF MYSELF [9]

Thank u , i think thats a great way to improve and i have started reading some easy books, but still confused by some word's different means. haha, but thank u.

i will keep reading them.

here is another question, in the end "the life is filled with surprises, happiness and challenges" is this correct? cuz i want to say three different things, and if i say "surprising happiness and challenges" is this same?

Undergraduate / I'm a seventeen year old Chinese girl; INTRODUCTION OF MYSELF [9]

My name is lin, I am a seventeen-year-old Chinese girl. I was born in ZhengZhou, the capital of Henan province in the central part of the country, for the past 17 years, I like talking with people and I also love singing, jezz music and reading. I have been playing piano for 4 years and I really enjoy it. I am passionate about learning new language.

Now I have been in New Zealand for 6 months as a high school student. I completed my basic education in China. There are lots of differences between here and my home. For example, not only could I not choose the subjects but we also had an extremely strict time table. The first lesson began at 7:00 o'clock am and the last one finished at 9:40 o'clock. Waking up at 6:30 was inescapable and necessary. We lived in the students dormitory, just like the university.

After 3 years of high school life, I was tired. Maybe it was my desire to be on my own or prove something to everyone back home but I could hardly wait to make a decision for a fresh start, so I came here, expecting new energy and new experiences to really push me to mature. I was pleased to see a new start of my life. The sunshine, the sea and the lovely people here, obviously the friendship here also help me a lot.

Life is like a journey, filled with surprises happiness and challenges and I would like to enjoy the every single spot rather than the destination.

thanks