Writing Feedback / My friend Daniel is a fan of Manchester United [3]

My friend name is Daniel Kong.He is a friendly and socialble person. He has a oval shape, sharpy nose and ear, a pair of big eye and have a short black hair. He is tall with a thin body. His family consists of 4 member ; a father, mother, younger brother, and himself. He is turning 13 this year.He has a good manner and personalites, so i felt very comfortable talking with him.Moreover, he has sense of humour and love telling jokes to me. That's make most of the people love to talk with him. When he was free, he likes to watch news about football on the television. He is a huge fan of Manchester United football club. His favourite food is eating pizza with a glass of cold coke. He is a good student in my class and always get high marks in every subject, so when I dosen't understand something, he will explain to me clearly. I felt lucky to have a friend like him. I hope our friendship will never end and be best friend forever.

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