Writing Feedback / IELTS Task2 ; "that all students should learn a foreign language" [4]

hey this is my essay about the foreign language debate-
Many a time, we are faced with an embarrasing situation in which we cannot converse with an individual of a different foreign origin, due to language barriers. It is clear that, therefore everyone needs to learn atleast one other different language apart from one's mother tongue. While on vacation to a new country, it is essential that we know it's native language. Hence, everyone should take up as a challenge, the art of learning a foreign lan

Poetry / What If Tomorrow Never Comes; Feed back on Poem [4]

hi, im really glad that we still have some 'Shakesqeares' n 'Wordsworths' with us!..:-)..First let me compliment you on your beauthjful writing skills...Have you heard of a 'Haiku'?..Its a type of poem in which you describe your feelings with the help of seasons...and that's exactly what you've done!..:-) n its marvellous!:-) Your in the right direction..just keep working ahead.:-)

Writing Feedback / AGE OF GETTING MARRIED ; NEGATIVE & POSITIVE ASPECTS [3]

Hello!...you write very well!...but just one suggestion...in most of thee places instead of the word "married", you have used the word "marriage"...sothat causes a little hindrance to the fluencyof your language.You have very strong points against marriage which is a very good thing...Keep up the good work..n hope you don't take my suggestion in the wrong meaning..Regards!