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Dawnh   
Feb 17, 2013
Essays / how has ancient Egyptian art influence the way i view the world today? [2]

Can someone please help organize my essay and make it sound as if i am talking to someone through this essay not in a research paper way. This is a admission essay for a in high school program called lyceum. It for upcoming juniors and senior. Colleges love this program and it will better my chances of getting a scholar ship. Please help i would really appreciate it.

Ancient Egyptian art is an ancient form of art that has not only influenced the world but also the way I view it today. Coincidentally, ancient Egyptian art is major influence on todays art and architecture. Surprisingly, most constructions today, from skyscrapers to houses, use the linear step design method of the pyramid. Brilliantly invented by an Egyptian civilization three thousand years ago. Egyptian art surrounds and influences us in everyday life. From ancient designs found on the wall of homes, offices, state buildings as well as sculptures used in homes and offices. This ancient civilization crafted different forms of incredible art using math, science and basic tools. to build 24ft sculptures to pyramids they must have been beyond advanced for their time period. This ancient civilization not only made miraculous forms of art but through it they portrayed the most significant to them. By incorporation through their art and their view on the value of life, culture, religion, and art.I believe that this ancient civilization spoke to us through their art and telling us we an accomplish anything just with knowledge. They also encouraged us to bring to life our art from adding patterns, color, life value, to encouragement. They made us tell through art that would always be there.

Ancient Egyptian art has also influenced the art of the greeks and the western world. Egyptian art inspired the Greek to experiment with different methods of art techniques,especially in architecture. I think that ancient Egyptian art influenced the rest of the world to experiment with art and challenge their 'modern art'. It is the earliest and longest living form of ancient art around the Mediterranean. Egypt is famous for its pyramids, hieroglyphics, paintings, architecture, pottery, and sculptures. Most elements of the ancient Egyptian art remained remarkably stable over that 3,000 year period with relatively little outside influence all remarkably crafted with relatively little outside influence.
Dawnh   
Feb 17, 2013
Writing Feedback / Nowadays for many people the Internet is replacing regular books. [6]

I think that you should not only talk about how it affects you in bad ways but also include how it beneficial it is to other and the environment. For example autistic children, they are able to use those devices to read with out tearing them the can zoom in or out, practice writing the same world right next to it and etc. and think about the trees that were saving. Now all libraries will shut down but with technology it saves money since a library doesn't have to have 20 of the same books that cost with discount around $20 while they can 10 for a price of under $10 with worrying about someone not returning the book and not also paying the fee but with internet it automatically deletes after curtain number of days. I hopes this helps. I don't want to seem judgmental just wanted you too see the positive. And i do agree with you in most cases.
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