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Feb 24, 2013
Writing Feedback / " Web of Risks" by Brad Stone ; SUMMARY OF ARTICLE [4]

Social-networking sites are very popular for people to use to make friends

I'd make it - "Social-networking sites are very popular for making friends" or even "Social-networking sites are popularly used for making friends".

According to the article, the author pointed at people who used social-network to share bad stuff which is not supposed to be posted on the web.

The author exemplifies the risks of using social networks by talking about certain people who had shared their opinion or information on social networks which was not supposed to be posted on the web.
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