RyaneBin7
Feb 25, 2013
Undergraduate / "I'm a really active person"; Westmont C/Extracurricular activities [4]
Please help me organize my essay, I'm really bad at it. Thank you for your time and help, its really appreciated.
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Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (1000 character maximum).
Please provide a statement (appr. 250-500 words) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.
My name is Ebtehal Almathami. I'm a really active person , I hate staying at home and doing nothing , that makes me feel lazy and worthless, I like to help people as much as I can , that is my love , it's makes me feel like a better person . I volunteered in many things this year . in October I was a member in a campaign of breast cancer . I really want all women to know all about what is that disease about . and awareness the women about it so they can know and not getting afraid about it . and in summer I volunteered in a summer school in teaching the young kids of the right ways of using the internet and helping the lab teacher to teach them the basic things in computer. I wished that I could do more in volunteering work . but actually there is no time , especially that I'm studying .i used to do tokondoo but know I attend the gym four days a week doing aerobics , running and my most favorite thing at all is swimming . I'm crazy about it since I was young !!
I am currently enrolled at Princess Noura University in the Networsk and communication systems major. I have completed three years here including the preparatory year, which is a requirement for getting into the major. After my preparatory year I was able to choose any major that the university offered due to my high grades. I chose my major based on my interest in it after my preparatory year. I have gained more interest and passion for my area of study. Because of this I have made the decision to transfer from my current university in saudi arabia and study abroad in the US. I want to expand my knowledge and have access to a wider range of information. I enjoy the different disciplines and an open education atmosphere which my university lacks due to it being an all girl university. Another factor is that there are many restrictions on our education with regards to having men teaching us so we have to learn through network conferencing when men are teaching which for me did not work since it was lacking in any hands on experiences and I really want to be challenged and expand my horizens and opportunities on an equal standard. This does not take away that the education that I gained at princess noura university was valuable and challenging which was the main motivation and drive The university still has not graduated its first class and that also makes the academic processes more complicated than most.
if i had the chance to attend westmont it would be a wonderful learning experience . your school offers me all the challenges and opportunities that colleges are supposed to . westmont is my first choice school and i hope that i am able to attend your school next year !
Please help me organize my essay, I'm really bad at it. Thank you for your time and help, its really appreciated.
_________________________________________________________________ ______________________
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (1000 character maximum).
Please provide a statement (appr. 250-500 words) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.
My name is Ebtehal Almathami. I'm a really active person , I hate staying at home and doing nothing , that makes me feel lazy and worthless, I like to help people as much as I can , that is my love , it's makes me feel like a better person . I volunteered in many things this year . in October I was a member in a campaign of breast cancer . I really want all women to know all about what is that disease about . and awareness the women about it so they can know and not getting afraid about it . and in summer I volunteered in a summer school in teaching the young kids of the right ways of using the internet and helping the lab teacher to teach them the basic things in computer. I wished that I could do more in volunteering work . but actually there is no time , especially that I'm studying .i used to do tokondoo but know I attend the gym four days a week doing aerobics , running and my most favorite thing at all is swimming . I'm crazy about it since I was young !!
I am currently enrolled at Princess Noura University in the Networsk and communication systems major. I have completed three years here including the preparatory year, which is a requirement for getting into the major. After my preparatory year I was able to choose any major that the university offered due to my high grades. I chose my major based on my interest in it after my preparatory year. I have gained more interest and passion for my area of study. Because of this I have made the decision to transfer from my current university in saudi arabia and study abroad in the US. I want to expand my knowledge and have access to a wider range of information. I enjoy the different disciplines and an open education atmosphere which my university lacks due to it being an all girl university. Another factor is that there are many restrictions on our education with regards to having men teaching us so we have to learn through network conferencing when men are teaching which for me did not work since it was lacking in any hands on experiences and I really want to be challenged and expand my horizens and opportunities on an equal standard. This does not take away that the education that I gained at princess noura university was valuable and challenging which was the main motivation and drive The university still has not graduated its first class and that also makes the academic processes more complicated than most.
if i had the chance to attend westmont it would be a wonderful learning experience . your school offers me all the challenges and opportunities that colleges are supposed to . westmont is my first choice school and i hope that i am able to attend your school next year !