Writing Feedback / 'Thank you God for those gifts' - friendship essay [11]

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friendship

Friends are good and gift from god to our life to be happy and support us under all conditions. Its relationship fall of faithful, sincere and honest .

friendship is so important for us, It makes us sociable and get rid of shyness. Friends encourage us in bad and good condition, they feel gladness with your achievements and push u to achieve your dreams. Friend like tree the seed in the soil even though bad conditions and storms that are exposed they grow so hard and became a strong tree so the friends with the bad state of affairs the relation grow, become strong and close with each other.

The friends respect your opinion and know how do u think and feel even if your friend incompatibility with you and you have different opinion he can understand you with his own way and he can bears your temper, He can relax you . we need friends especially when we have a problem the can encourage us, find the solution and how to overcome the problems.

I have a lot of friends some of them are close friend and others are less they occupied a large part in my life. I have friend her name Anna, she is so smart, affictionate and sweetheart, we do a lot of activity like as go to the picnic, tennis and racing, we spend interesting time with each other. she can speak turkish so she learns me, we alternative all secret with each other she is only I confident with her. we lighter about our worries. she is always with me in each step in my life.

Thankful god for those gifts in our life, friends like a breath.

Writing Feedback / Traveling broadens one's perspectives [6]

This topic talk about traveling

travel is interesting and broaden the mind , Its faster way to know every you want and provide yourself with the knowledge about countries and continents especially if your major Geography, so is the best way than read books. travel is trying new experience in your life, meet new people, know about the cultures, listening to new kind of music and eating new foods.

the travel is the time of comfortable and relaxing from hard work. you can spend enjoyable time with your family and take a photos who are visiting. The most pleasurable time when you visit palace, castle and museum you know the history and mystery about the country so its so exciting, also dining in exotic restaurants and trying a pubic foods.

they are a lot of transports you can travel with them such as plane, train, car and ship, most people always chose the faster way is plane but in my opinion the ship is the most interesting one because you can see the nature around you through the trips mountains and ocean, and take photos for memorize.

I traveled with my friend Anna to Jordan we stayed in the hotel in Amman we went out every day and shopped after few day we book a ticket at travel agent to went a trip. in the morning we went to petra by bus and we have still walked for 3 hours till we reached to pink gate it was so exciting even though we felt tired and then we rode a bus to went to Al Ram valy its desert place and it contains a lot of tents, we watched sun set its amazing, then a DJ party was made so all people dancing till midnight we dine after of all we slept in the tent. then we went to Aqapa we rode a ferry and swam the weather there was so hat and in the evening we went to Japanese mall finally through the way we returned home we played buzzle and joking with the group and guided tour, we reached to the hotel and saw all pictures we took.

In my opinion everyone should travel for relaxing and cognition, Its very important ti spend time with your family. The life and time are not waiting for us to spend time with your loved ones and your family.