thalhah
Mar 28, 2013
Writing Feedback / Toefl; In which environment children should grow? Is it a big city or countryside? [15]
i like your idea..you are going to give a proper, easy development element to our children.but in opposite idea i think our children nowadays lack of challanges..they dont feel the hardship of their parents growing in the rural area like countryside which becoming the main reason why our young generation tend to involve in many social problem...social problem can happen in either countryside or big city but in my point of view social life in the city had becoming the main platform for this problem to occur to our beloved children.
thank you..i'm just sharing my idea..thats all.
i like your idea..you are going to give a proper, easy development element to our children.but in opposite idea i think our children nowadays lack of challanges..they dont feel the hardship of their parents growing in the rural area like countryside which becoming the main reason why our young generation tend to involve in many social problem...social problem can happen in either countryside or big city but in my point of view social life in the city had becoming the main platform for this problem to occur to our beloved children.
thank you..i'm just sharing my idea..thats all.