pohui88
Apr 9, 2013
Writing Feedback / Mr. Heng taught me the value of HARDWORKING; My favorite TEACHER [7]
Hi, I'm new here.I' always have mistake with my essay and get the lowest mark in school,i hope with you all guide i could improve my English and grammar more.
Here is my first essay---------------Describing my favourite teacher
Mr. Heng is forty-two,but he does not look a day over thirty,he is muscular and well-built. He is tall ,I am just half of his size.He has a tanned complexion and he is always crew-cut. Mr Heng is the guy who influence me a lot, he taught me to hardworking since I first met him at the tuition center, as if he knew that I am a lazy person.He teaches science and that is the reason why I had always scored high marks in my science.
Mr Heng live just down stair of my apartment,so when i get screw up with my study I would drop by his house and ask for help. He is indeed a good teacher, he always welcome me to visit him and ask anything about study.Mr. Heng is also my best friend for me, he is willing to share his experience to me.Whenever I got into trouble with my parents, I would turn to his advice.He would listen without condemning me but at the same time, he help me see my parents' point of view.
Mr.Heng has been a great influence in my life and I am very fortunate to have such a great teacher.
Hi, I'm new here.I' always have mistake with my essay and get the lowest mark in school,i hope with you all guide i could improve my English and grammar more.
Here is my first essay---------------Describing my favourite teacher
Mr. Heng is forty-two,but he does not look a day over thirty,he is muscular and well-built. He is tall ,I am just half of his size.He has a tanned complexion and he is always crew-cut. Mr Heng is the guy who influence me a lot, he taught me to hardworking since I first met him at the tuition center, as if he knew that I am a lazy person.He teaches science and that is the reason why I had always scored high marks in my science.
Mr Heng live just down stair of my apartment,so when i get screw up with my study I would drop by his house and ask for help. He is indeed a good teacher, he always welcome me to visit him and ask anything about study.Mr. Heng is also my best friend for me, he is willing to share his experience to me.Whenever I got into trouble with my parents, I would turn to his advice.He would listen without condemning me but at the same time, he help me see my parents' point of view.
Mr.Heng has been a great influence in my life and I am very fortunate to have such a great teacher.