Scholarship / my curiosity and desire to learn; Scholarship/why deserve [7]

Shpresa
Dear, this is a good piece, and I must confess quite moving. I think having a title is necessary, and also proof reading the essay, paying attention to the definite articles used will shapen the work.

Scholarship / my curiosity and desire to learn; Scholarship/why deserve [7]

Didgeridoo
my own experience is quite different from yours, and is ineluctably tied to my cultural experience as an African. But I would suggest you make some research like asking your parent or anybody close to you to recollect to you some of the experiences you seek. LOL!

Scholarship / my curiosity and desire to learn; Scholarship/why deserve [7]

Didgeridoo
ok. How did my experience contribute to my choice of economics as a career? You may decide to include experiences you had that were influenced by the state of the economy, financial decisions and actions that may have caused some strain, or even your experience with the financial and capital markets. As you rightly pointed out, give more specifics, they are more convincing. Thanks.