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harsha138   
Jul 19, 2013
Writing Feedback / Will technology deteriorates our ability to think? [4]

The world has a significant change over the past years.This change is mainly due to the development in technology.The world is always attracted to new technology.This attraction to new technology has made to develop the technology.The development is quiet good and necessary but it has an effect which is deteriorating our ability of thinking.

Technology has made an instrument that can be used to solve a problem in seconds,for us which the problem might take several days to be solved.But people are using the calculators even for most simple problems.This really is a problem which deteriorates our ability to think.It is absolute that, if we are not even applying our mind for simple calculations,our thinking definitely deteriorates.

The internet is a greatest development in technology.It enriches our knowledge.Internet is a pool of topics where we can find info about anything.But besides these advantages, it really has a part in deterioration of our thinking.If we are assigned a work,the first thing we will do is searching the particular work in internet and copying it.Where goes our knowledge and thinking if we are depending on internet and copying some others work.Even a small assignment given in the schools, the students are copying from the internet.It is really a huge deterioration of our thinking.

Another invention that is a revolution is sensor.We can even control a machine with a remote.It is a great invention but besides it is making us lethargic and lazy.The sensors are now even used in fans and lights,not even making us to move a little distance to switch them.The smart t.v, which we can control by motion of hand and movement of eyes. At least for the old televisions we used remote,so at least our fingers will be in movement.But now due to smart t.v we would become more lazy.

Technology of course deteriorates our thinking but it has brought the change.It made a human to think beyond limits.How amazing it is that the u.v rays can be converted to sensors.It is really a great invention.Technology saves our time,it saves our power and it fulfill our needs.

From the above ideas I can say that technology is useful when it is used in limits.Technology is beneficial but it should not be used excessively.
harsha138   
Jul 19, 2013
Writing Feedback / The Effects of Using Cell phone in school [12]

well you should say
1.privacy is invaded.
2.so that they can concentrate on their education.
3.u should not say waste part of class time....the sentence formation is not seeming good due to this....the class time will be wasted.

And yes of course introduction is main.You have to talk about cell phones in 1st para and from then you should speak about the consequences.
harsha138   
Jul 25, 2013
Writing Feedback / GRE essay.....will technology deteriorate our thinking abilities? [5]

The world has a significant change over the past years due to the development in technology.The world is always attracted to new technology.This attraction to new technology has made to develop the technology.The development is quiet good and necessary but it has an effect which is deteriorating our ability of thinking.

Technology has made an instrument that can be used to solve a problem in seconds,for us which the problem might take several days to be solved.But people are using the calculators even for most simple problems.This really is a problem which deteriorates our ability to think.It is absolute that, if we are not even applying our mind for simple calculations,our thinking definitely deteriorates.

The internet is a greatest development in technology.It enriches our knowledge.Internet is a pool of topics where we can find info about anything.But besides these advantages, it really has a part in deterioration of our thinking.If we are assigned a work,the first thing we will do is searching the particular work in internet and copying it.Where goes our knowledge and thinking if we are depending on internet and copying some others work.Even a small assignment given in the schools, the students are copying from the internet.It is really a huge deterioration of our thinking.

Another invention that is a revolution is sensor.We can even control a machine with a remote.It is a great invention but besides it is making us lethargic and lazy.The sensors are now even used in fans and lights,not even making us to move a little distance to switch them.The smart t.v, which we can control by motion of hand and movement of eyes. At least for the old televisions we used remote,so at least our fingers will be in movement.But now due to smart t.v we would become more lazy.

Technology of course deteriorates our thinking but it has brought the change.It made a human to think beyond limits.How amazing it is that the u.v rays can be converted to sensors.It is really a great invention.Technology saves our time,it saves our power and it fulfill our needs.

From the above ideas I can say that technology is useful when it is used in limits.Technology is beneficial but it should not be used excessively.
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