Posts by ashat165 Name: Ashat haq
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Why Cities and Counties Fail: Municipal Bankruptcy [2]
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IELTS; I'm on holiday and ask my friend to take care of my house and pet [4]
Dear Ismail,
Hope you are all fine. I am on holiday as you know. First of all thanks for helping me. I am telling you some instruction which will help you out. In my absence please take care of my cat. Give milk in the morning and stay for a while with her. Also you can take her to the lawn.
There is another thing which I have to tell you that receive the mails and voice messages and if any important please save as you can. I will come tomorrow at morning so you also have to stay at night. Please care my house and specially my cat. Give corn and some fats which you can take from fridge.
Anyone who visit my house tell him that I am outside of town and will come tomorrow.
Thanks again for your cooperation.
See you soon.
Your friend
Ashat
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