Essays / General biological science, Statement of purpose [8]

Okay here are some few points n please do write essay for me in a proper structure.(my study purpose)
1) The first thing is that my background is from biology so I am interested on Biological science

2) Apart from theory I believe in pactical approach of study were I can find there in aboard,Besides that project work would help me to be more confidence

3) And u know this time plays a mojor role to develop our carrer,.if my base is not strong then I would not be able to fulfill my dream..research on plants fungi

4) I have completed my higher secondary level and have socred good marks too..so I want to make my carrer in this field

5) Education gain from there is used in my contry,furthermore I am looking forward to do my research in plants and fungi

6) I am from Nepal and u know Nepal is very rich in biodiversity.so iwould definately do my research here,,and there is a probability of getting new species too..

7) Hope this dream will be fulfilled by yours college..and...

Well these are some points that why I am wanting to do my study in abroad..i would be very grateful to you if u write an essay(statement of purpose) regarding to this point .and plz I am expecting a good one so that the reader will give more intrested while he is reading my essay. So plz plz write me as soon as possible.

Wating for ur respone...

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Essays / General biological science, Statement of purpose [8]

here i have written an essay so please....

College is a once in a lifetime opportunity where an individual learns and experiences new things everyday. I choose your university because it is a university which grants young adults with goals, higher education and also opportunity to become success in life. Moreover your university offers me many different opprtunities and resources to take the road of success.

I am very fascinated toward the Biology subject, I have keen intrest on it. After completing my school level i joined my high school level taking biology, physics and chemistry. I am good in all subject and I have scored very good marks in my Higher Secondary level (Intermediate level). Eventhough my inclination is toward biology. I want to make my carrer in this field. So I would like to do my undergraduate in General biology. Admittedly, my own life long goal is to be a professional lectural.

We all know that Nepal is a country which is rich in natural resourses and rich in biodiversity too. In future it will be more easy for me to step the ladder of my dream. I mean to say that after completing my undergraduate, I am looking forward to do my research in the field of plants and fungi. I am looking forward to do my research program in Lichen,Here in Nepal we can find very rare species in the side of Mountain region as well as in Hilly region. However here we can find a very rare species of lichen.Besides that here are some few species of lichen which have its own value in medicinal purpose not only that some lichen can be use in nuclear reactor and some sample has benn taken to US from here. So this is the reason why I am interested in biology. And I hope that knowledge gained from your university will definitely help me a lot in future.

I have no doubt that ( uni name) is the appropriate one for me, since it provides the right academic climate and a unique mix of educational advantages, thus I would like to do my studies in your university to further improve my future prospects and my professional life. Thank you in advance for considering my application. It would be a great honour for me if an opportunity to purse further studies at your highly esteemed university.