Writing Feedback / IELTS Academic essay: Is academic qualifications important than personal life experience a [5]

Just a thought: "In conclusion, academic qualifications[/b], personal experience and values of job candidate are main factors for making decision in hiring employee. Therefore, when hiring an employee, making decision based on [b] only one of these factors might be imperfect solutionbiased for some kind of job position.

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Student Talk / Listening: 8.5 - I got my IELTS result today [12]

Congratulations! I am currently preparing for my IELTS as well. I love your band score, so beautiful.

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