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Posts by Jumanaa
Name: Jumana Yousef
Joined: Nov 16, 2013
Last Post: Nov 16, 2013
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From: Qatar
School: Aiss

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Jumanaa   
Nov 16, 2013
Writing Feedback / Have you ever felt like you don't recognize the feeling of being happy anymore? [3]

Have you ever felt like you don't recognize the feeling of being happy anymore? That feeling was a huge part of my daily routine as I felt nothing but real pain, sadness and sorrow. I was like the walking dead as joy and happiness were grabbed and stolen from me. I'll never forget that feeling. I'll never forget that gloomy day when my friend Erica and I were walking down the street after our first day as seniors, discussing our last year. While we were walking, we noticed a well-dressed muscular tall man in black suit wearing dark glasses coming towards us and holding a gun! Clearly he was drunk. I knew that moment that something bad is going to happen. I didn't see Erica shivering like this before.

I'll post the rest of the story as soon as someone check this part for me.
Jumanaa   
Nov 16, 2013
Writing Feedback / Effect of Technology on Children - Persuasive [3]

This issue is very important to all of us. Global warming is actually related to technology.
I loved the last one.. There used to be a world without touch screens and Siri.
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