Writing Feedback / iELTS: Is ambition is a positive or negative characteristic? Is it necessary for success? [4]


you can write it concisely in this way,which makes it quite clear and meaningful
An ambitious desire of an individual has always been an outcome in betterment of the society like most of the technological marvels and unprecedented change in standard of living.

Graduate / My reason for wanting to pursue graduate physics in graduate school is simple; SOP [6]

There are several reasons for pursuing my graduation in physics from Graduation school, but unprecedented one is the relation of particle behaviour with human mind, which has been a quite appealing prospect for me

Scholarship / Essay about Personal importance to you -"Stay hungry.Stay foolish" [5]


THis line is still confusing.. i think it would b a bit like this one..
To saw diplomats in conference, representing the NGOs of their countries in order to discuss and develop solution to world problems