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Joined: Apr 27, 2009
Last Post: Feb 18, 2010
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applesauce32   
Apr 27, 2009
Research Papers / Problem and Solution essay- global warming [10]

i'm having trouble starting my research paper on addressing the problem of global warming and its solutions..

my paper is as follows
-intro
-what is global warming/whats causing it
-its effects
-solutions..
-what the future looks like
-conclusion

does this sound good?
applesauce32   
Apr 28, 2009
Research Papers / Problem and Solution essay- global warming [10]

thanks for the advice! now i'm just having trouble with the first few opening sentences..i'm not sure how i should start it off.
applesauce32   
Sep 11, 2009
Speeches / Does America Still Have Heroes? [28]

you could start it off by grabbing the audience's attention by telling a deep,detailed heroic story..then proceed to give evidence that heroes do exist
applesauce32   
Sep 11, 2009
Writing Feedback / the problems of balancing school, job and a family. [7]

What is the specific writing assignment?
as for my opinion, i think the introduction is pretty on key. my mind is dead at the moment, so i can't offer much advice on how to continue it. but the start is good!
applesauce32   
Sep 11, 2009
Essays / Stronger argument claim needed. [4]

I have to write an essay on a time where i was embarrassed by someone's use or misuse of a particular language. my example is a (hispanic) coworker not realizing the way she said something was extremely rude and the tone she used was inappropriate for the situation. as a whole the claim i'm trying to make is that immigrants use English in the wrong way, it's not what you say it's how you say it kinda thing. i started with this vague argument claim "Many immigrants misuse the English language and get themselves into trouble." it's so vague..i just can't think of anything else!
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