writing_learner
Dec 16, 2013
Grammar, Usage / Grammatical errors in this sentence [15]
"Finally, after analysing the questionnaire and interview data, we summarize the elements of video that test-takers really pay attention to and the functions of those elements."
Perhaps one of the following - in my opinion:
1/ summarized:
2/ elements of a video: in case you're mentioning a random video, the indefinite article is needed ("the" if it is a particular video)
"Finally, after analysing the questionnaire and interview data, we summarize the elements of video that test-takers really pay attention to and the functions of those elements."
Perhaps one of the following - in my opinion:
1/ summarized:
2/ elements of a video: in case you're mentioning a random video, the indefinite article is needed ("the" if it is a particular video)