bapu_60
Jan 11, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS Essay: Old people health care. Is it the responsibility of the family or government [7]
The 'age old' question of whose responsibility are the poor old people who have no source of income and elderly who
cannot take of themselves. Some section of people suggest it is the responsibility of the immediate family;
others would argue it is the government's duty to take care of the older people.In the essay we will see that
government is more equipped and are more accountable. [..]
I am aiming for band level 7 in ielts so let me know of the general flaws which may stop me from getting that.
The 'age old' question of whose responsibility are the poor old people who have no source of income and elderly who
cannot take of themselves. Some section of people suggest it is the responsibility of the immediate family;
others would argue it is the government's duty to take care of the older people.In the essay we will see that
government is more equipped and are more accountable. [..]
I am aiming for band level 7 in ielts so let me know of the general flaws which may stop me from getting that.