Undergraduate / My teacher want paragraph about a good OR a bad childhood experience i had ,, [7]

Nothings wrong with that, actually all kids (in your age) do the same.

Writing Feedback / The contribution of three different sectors to the UK economy; 'agriculture 50%' [8]

I still don't get it.

Writing Feedback / Many teachers assign homework to students every day. 'Valuable exercise' [9]

I think it is. It'll be a better application/ test to what is tackled by the teacher.

Writing Feedback / IELTS - International tourism leads to both - tension and understanding [3]

That's pretty interesting and oh I love the work of a tourist guide too.