Writing Feedback / TOEFL: Technology impact on children's creativity. [4]

Take my little brother's experience for example. When he does not know how to write the essay assigned by his teacher, he would set up a chatting group in the online chatting room where those who are interested in his topic could participate to share their ideas, and during the discussions the inspirations would come into his mind. On the contrary, in the past, without the presence of advanced technology,children could just exchange ideas with people around them like parents, teachers and classmates. Thus, technology plays an essential role in stimulating children's creativity by allowing them to exchange ideas without any barriers