Writing Feedback / New methods for food preparation and preservation give us opportunity to eat healthier food [2]

I am writing this essay to familiarize you all about my writing skills. Some people, by God grace have fabulous skills to express their feelings, emotions and desires in the form of writing. I know i'm too far away from them. However, I have read somewhere that hard work and practice are very powerful tools and if someone know their values,he or she could reach at the peak of success.

'Now a days food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.'

This topic on which i'm about to write, took from Barrons Toefl book. I Hope you will review my essay and advice me suggestions to refine it.

Without any doubt, it is very true that preparing food is very easy now a days. Inventions of microwave, oven, freezer,refrigerator and many more not only helps in preparing food quickly but also help in preserving it for a longer period of time. We can enjoy a great variety of food and most importantly we are consuming healthier food This gives the people an opportunity to spend more time with their loved ones and less time in the kitchen.

Writing Feedback / Home is good place to learn a lot, however school is the best place to learn. [8]

I believe that it is better to study at school than at home. I can learn a lot if I study alone, but I can learn lot more if I study at school with other people. I can gain a lot of information from other students. I can learn a lot by interacting with them. I feel motivated to study more if I don't study alone. Therefore, school is the best place for me to study.

First of all, Information comes with technology. Now a days, DVD, computer and other digital gadgets can help students informed and updated in all possible way. But, information comes with people also. When people share knowledge, they eventually add their personal experiences or even third person experience to give complete insight. This may help in understanding the information thoroughly. Computers and DVD's do not do that. Information on them is mostly theoretical and subjective based. Studying at school give me a chance to interact with other students. So, I can learn more at school.

Studying at home is beneficial as no one can bother me and, I can work on my ideas and thoughts. But how can i get to know if my ideas are good or bad? Or, how can i get to know if they will be beneficial to me or society in any way? This is the other reason I like to study at school. Students can interact with each other. They can share their ideas, moreover, make suggestions at same time if any piece of idea is not applicable. It is true even with teachers. Besides giving knowledge, they can check students work and give additional information at same time.

Finally, studying at school motivates me. There is nobody at home whom i can compete with. Zeal to do best just go away if there is no competition. However, it is completely different at school. When i see other students studying, it drives me to study harder. It doesn't mean, I have bad feelings or jealously for them. However ,I wanted to be a student who score highest in the class. And I believe that most of the students wanted the same in the school,so as I do. That's why, School is the best place for me.

In conclusion, Home is good place to learn a lot. However, School is the best place to learn. It gives enormous chances to enhance knowledge, interaction with other students and teachers and finally, school motivates to do the best.