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New methods for food preparation and preservation give us opportunity to eat healthier food


apanwar01 2 / 2  
Jun 29, 2014   #1
I am writing this essay to familiarize you all about my writing skills. Some people, by God grace have fabulous skills to express their feelings, emotions and desires in the form of writing. I know i'm too far away from them. However, I have read somewhere that hard work and practice are very powerful tools and if someone know their values,he or she could reach at the peak of success.

'Now a days food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.'

This topic on which i'm about to write, took from Barrons Toefl book. I Hope you will review my essay and advice me suggestions to refine it.

Without any doubt, it is very true that preparing food is very easy now a days. Inventions of microwave, oven, freezer,refrigerator and many more not only helps in preparing food quickly but also help in preserving it for a longer period of time. We can enjoy a great variety of food and most importantly we are consuming healthier food This gives the people an opportunity to spend more time with their loved ones and less time in the kitchen.

Eddie Han 2 / 6  
Jun 30, 2014   #2
Don't down yourself to begin with! Everyone has the ability to write like Shakespeare (actually, don't write like him, because then people will look at your and think you are a lunatic), its just that some practiced their ability while others didn't have time to. I am not a great writer myself :) These are a bunch of things that I saw and I re-wrote them to my liking. If you think I am writing like Shakespeare, then please ignore these suggestions!

Without any doubt, it is very true that preparing food is very easy now a dayshas never been easier. Inventions of microwaves, ovens, freezers,refrigerators and many more not only helpsed in preparing food quickly, but also help in preserving it for a longer period of time . We can enjoy a great variety of food and most importantly, we are consuming healthier food. This gives the people an opportunity to spend more time with their loved ones and less time in the kitchen.
Earlier,cooking used to consume many hours everyday in order to fulfill the appetitesatisfy the families' appetite. But,However, technology playsed a very crucial role and it revolutionizesd everything,butwith the greatest impact isbeing seen in kitchen.The new inventionsof microwaves, gas and ovens made cooking and preparation of food so fast, convenient and easy.It is not only easy but saves a major amount of time everyday. Now we have more time for enjoyment and to indulge in various activities like movies,sports and trips with families and friends. (A bit repetitive - you've kind of Ctrl+Ced the introduction. I suggest adding some research into this, such as the length it would take to heat a chicken without a microwave)
Earlier, there were no ways to preserve the food for longer period of time.In order to prevent food from spoilageingand wastage, whatever cooked had been needed to finishhad to be eaten on the same day. Methods like Isuch as ice houses and boxes were used to preserve food, but they were common in colder region or near the river or lakes, so did not gain publicity everywhere .Fortunately, technology came with new motifs and invented modern methods like freezers and refrigerators and re solved the problems of spoilage and wastage.Now we can save the leftover food in the freezer and can enjoy it on another day. This way we have lots of variety in our food. Ice-creams, frosted food from all over the world can be brought and preserved in the refrigerators not for days but for months on end.
Good health is the requirement of everyone; and we get it from healthy food. Earlier, fresh fruits and vegetables were so hard to find, (and...? What problems did it cause?) but fortunately this is not the issue anymore. Modern transportation like Pplanes, ships and trucks haveareused to get fresh fruits and vegetables from all parts of the world and all year long. Now we have almost all types and varieties of fruits and vegetables in our kitchen.and because of such an easyThanks to complete availability most people prefer healthy eating.
Our life style is very fast,and we don't have much time to spend in kitchen but then. Also, we prefer good food. New methods for food preparation and preservation give us freedom to utilize our time with families and friends, enjoy varieties of food and lastly most importantlyit give us opportunity to eat healthier food.


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