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Sep 26, 2014
Writing Feedback / A greater proportion of the budget should be allotted to education and prevention issues - IELTS [14]
The essay seems good, but you have to include both the historical and current perspectives of role of women in the society. Accordingly, proofread for a few grammatical mistakes and reference the essay
The essay seems good, but you have to include both the historical and current perspectives of role of women in the society. Accordingly, proofread for a few grammatical mistakes and reference the essay
