Undergraduate / "Limitless" - MIT Essay; I come from a family who thinks a human limit exists [3]

I'm not really used to writing essays. Can you please help me with this? If this sounds enough or just sounds like another boring essay? Thank you.

Describe the world you come from; for example, your family, clubs, school, community, city, or town. How has that world shaped your dreams and aspirations?(*) (200-250 words)

I come from a family who thinks a human limit exists. That's the reason why I don't feel totally at home when I'm home. My parents never made it to undergraduate diploma. My sisters could only attend average quality university. It was only my brother who could make it to attend ITB for postgraduate program. But all they think is we will always end up being employed to earn money and that is it. We never think we can change the world.

But here I am, living under this roof. I always feel my genes aren't the same with theirs. I assume I am the victim of genes mutation in my family. I think differently. I always believe we never have a limit and that we are actually meant to be more than being employed by company and have a new family. We are meant to take care of this world.

For seventeen years I live below the same roof as they do, the fact that I'm not the same has given me one aspiration that I dare to chase. It's that I will run further than my brother does. I will run to the edge of the world and show everyone, especially my family, that we have no limit and our future is more than being employed for high salary. Our real future is about changing the world into a better place by our limitless capability.

Undergraduate / Things To Do For Joy - MIT Essay [3]

Can you tell me if this kind of essay is good to read?

We know you lead a busy life, full of activities, many of which are required of you. Tell us about something you do for the pleasure of it

I always feel excitement when I type MIT open course web , edx or coursera web's address on my phone's browser. My eyes start to search for an interesting course to take, and my heart's voice shouts passionately, "This must be cool! That must be fun!". Then my brain will try to calm my heart down, "Relax, buddy. We can't take all the courses available. We have busy days ahead.". Finally I click one of the courses and my whole body will feel the joy of being ready to learn something new. This happens every Friday night when I prepare my things-to-do list for the weekend.

I always feel impatient to wait on weekdays. My heart often begs, "Please, hurry Saturday.". And my brain will sigh in response, "Be patient, buddy. Do your homework first.". So there it is, my passion for learning new things is what my whole soul is fighting for.

Undergraduate / MIT Essay - Three Notebooks - modes buttons [3]

Can you please tell me if I use a good concept to show my personality? Should I change it? Is the grammar good? I really need some help. Thank you.

What attribute of your personality are you most proud of, and how has it impacted your life so far? This could be your creativity, effective leadership, sense of humor, integrity, or anything else you'd like to tell us about. (*) (200-250 words)

I have three modes button in me equipped with ambitious trait. First, the musical button. Second, the learner button. Third, the dreamer button. Often, those three buttons are active at the same time. Sometimes, only two of them are. These buttons are the reasons of my personal notebooks existence.

I have three personal notebooks. First notebook contains all the words that come out of my heart when I broke up with my boyfriend or got betrayed by my friend. Each page has my written songs with one single quote or reason that inspired me to write the song. I usually put this book near my guitar or piano.

Second notebook has all the things I've learned randomly with my enthusiasm. There's a page about the way human's brain really works while learning. And there's another page that explains how most of the couple's genes are similar. There are so many things I've got from my random curiosity in it.

Third notebook keeps all the dreams I've dreamed, hologram examiner, hologram hospital, free international school for orphans, a cure for cancer, camera-eye glasses and any other crazy things. On the first page I wrote, "This world is limitless."

Those three buttons and personal notebooks have been an essential part of me. They represent who I am literally. They show the imaginary world I live in. They explain how I see things differently. After all, they are the light ray of my true colors that illuminate the sameness around