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maiquynhbui

Dec 3, 2014

Essays / Topic explanation help - Schools don't teach the required skills? [4]

Schools do not teach the skills that students require once they leave school to establish a career. Only subjects applicable to the workplace should be taught at schools.

Can someone explain this topic for me?

maiquynhbui

Dec 5, 2014

Essays / Topic explanation help - Schools don't teach the required skills? [4]

Thank you so much for your help

maiquynhbui

Dec 5, 2014

Writing Feedback / ESSAY: RELATED TO COMPUTERS vs EDUCATION [4]

Hi. I hv some comments about ur essay
First, I think u should use the word better instead of best in the sentence "In my opinion, the latter is the best choice..." u can write : " In my opinion, the latter may be a better choice.." Cuz it's just ur opinion, so u should use hedging word in the statement that the info or idea is not 100% certain.

Second, I think the idea is not clear.
Just my opinion. I hope my comments r helpful for u. :)