Writing Feedback / Summary About Palestine [2]

The war started when 3 Israeli teenagers were kidnapped and killed in June, and in July Israel kidnapped 3 Palestinian teenagers were kidnapped and killed.
when the war started Palestine fired 4000 rockets into Israel, Israel fired 5000 rockets deep into Gaza, after that homes of Palestinian were reduced and no more rooms left in the hospitals because there are a lot of injuries and the schools were run by the united nations.

In august 10th when cease fire of 72 hours was declared, more than 1900 Palestinian were killed and most of them were civilians. Another 209 000 Palestinian were displaced to nearby Arab countries in 1947 the United Nation divided Palestine to Jews and Palestinian.BB

Essays / Places that I like to visit are Charlottetown in Canada Dubai and Spain. [2]

Places that I like to visit are Charlottetown in Canada Dubai and Spain.
firstly, Charlottetown is the a good a country to visit. I would like to go to Victoria Park and the museum.
Dubai is the 2nd country i want to visit. I would like to go to under water hotel and the ice hotel.
the last country i like to visit is Spain. I would like to visit the big stadium.