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Posts by sontrang_s2
Name: Nguyễn Trang
Joined: Oct 26, 2014
Last Post: Nov 3, 2014
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From: Viet Nam
School: Cao đẳng nghề Việt Mỹ

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sontrang_s2   
Nov 1, 2014
Writing Feedback / I hate smoking the most. People know about smoking's harmful effect, but they still smoke? [4]

I hate smoking the most. I don't know why most of the men know clearly about smoking's harmful effect, but they still smoke. Even they smoke too much like one or two pack of cigarettes per day. The important thing here is that smoking is not good for health. First, it's the main cause of lung cancer. Most people have lung cancer are men because of smoking too much. Secondly, they also have very bad breath and it makes other people feel uncomfortable. Likewise, Smoking makes their teeth more stained and dull. In addition, people smoke in everywhere, other people near them will be affected because of inhaling smoke. Then they will be ill or have another disease related to throat or lung. That's why i don't like smoking!
sontrang_s2   
Nov 3, 2014
Graduate / "Bolashak" - My wish to study at Britain [10]

I (want to skill) what I will receive at the end of my master's degree

you use "Skill" after Want to, what does this word mean in this sentence?
it will reduce the burden of my country and (help become) one of the best countries in the world => helps What to become ?

share my ideas, experiences

=> you should use ''and", it's better than a comma
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