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Nov 8, 2014
Writing Feedback / Write an essay that either supports or opposes the use of cell phones. [7]
1.Write an 8 sentence essay that either supports or opposes the use of cell phones.
I believe that cell phones have many assets. First of all, cell phones have particularly every service that people demand. For example, cell phones these days can take very high quality photo shoots and can be shared with other people through the SNS. Second, cell phones grant people access to the Internet. This enables users to work without a computer or laptop. Finally, cell phones can help people connect with one another. In addition, through satellites people can call each other everywhere, wherever they are. For the reasons above, I recommend using cell phones.
1.Write an 8 sentence essay that either supports or opposes the use of cell phones.
I believe that cell phones have many assets. First of all, cell phones have particularly every service that people demand. For example, cell phones these days can take very high quality photo shoots and can be shared with other people through the SNS. Second, cell phones grant people access to the Internet. This enables users to work without a computer or laptop. Finally, cell phones can help people connect with one another. In addition, through satellites people can call each other everywhere, wherever they are. For the reasons above, I recommend using cell phones.
