Undergraduate / My visits to SCU were of no surprise - CommonApp: Santa Clara University Prompt [2]

"If you visited campus, describe what aspect of your visit experience most influenced your impression of SCU." (150 words max).

I have the meat of this essay figured out, but am having trouble wrapping it up. Essay is as follows:

Having already been interested in the school for a majority of my youth, my visits to SCU were of no surprise. The first time was during my cousin's graduation, where which I was initially drawn in by the intricacies of the campus architecture and feel. Because I was there for graduation, I unfortunately was unable to see much of the campus. When senior year came around, I paid SCU another visit, this time in the form of a tour administered by one of the admissions readers along with a student panel. It was then that I was able to really see the school for what it is, convinced that the photos online really do the school no justice. I felt a feeling of at-home-ness and more, something that just can't be actualized by words.

Any advice, not only on how I could close this, but on the essay as a whole would be greatly appreciated! Thanks in advance!