Scholarship / medical doctor for a postgraduate scholarship [6]

hi my friend thank you sooo much for replying back.

well i am a resident surgeon and i had been to a really big teaching hospital in Germany, for a period of one month, and hence they offered me to join them in other words to do my residency (specialization) in Trauma Surgery, with them, but going through all the regular procedure....and hence they gave me these scholarship guys to approach...and i did, now they want everything what i want my goals and everything written in a brilliant form ... PLEASE HELP

here i tried to write...but dunno what shall i add more??...

does it sound any good????

Greetings Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a medical graduate, having successfully obtained and completed my course, that is Bachelor of Medicine and Bachelor of Surgery (MBBS) from xxxx in the year 2007. My professional career exhibits a record of strong achievement and significant contributions. Therefore, I aim to grow professionally and in the ideal environment....

what shall i add more???

shall i add my Germany experience in the cover letter....to mention how i came to know these guys???

thank you so much

God bless you

Scholarship / medical doctor for a postgraduate scholarship [6]

hmmm...but that all would fall under personal statement...isnt it??....but to furnish a cover letter???>>.... :-(