hilarydang
Jul 6, 2009
Scholarship / What should I do with the opening? (applying for a scholarship) [7]
I've practiced writing for long but this is the first time I've ever applied for a scholarship. I found it difficult to open my essay in a creative and impressive way. The judge will choose only one among hundreds of competitors and here is their topic.
Explain why you're interested in attending our school, describing both what you might contribute to the school and what you would hope to gain from your experience there
It sounds simple and personal, right? But I really want to express myself in an unique way. Some say that long-sentences are good, but others say short-sentences are better. Can I put my private story to make up opening? Will the judge get rid of it? Do you guys have any ideas? Please, help me.
I'm really looking forward to having the answer. Thank you very much.
I've practiced writing for long but this is the first time I've ever applied for a scholarship. I found it difficult to open my essay in a creative and impressive way. The judge will choose only one among hundreds of competitors and here is their topic.
Explain why you're interested in attending our school, describing both what you might contribute to the school and what you would hope to gain from your experience there
It sounds simple and personal, right? But I really want to express myself in an unique way. Some say that long-sentences are good, but others say short-sentences are better. Can I put my private story to make up opening? Will the judge get rid of it? Do you guys have any ideas? Please, help me.
I'm really looking forward to having the answer. Thank you very much.