Writing Feedback / Humans are the most clever and talented creature across the world [2]

Humans are veryclever and talented . One thing that separates humans from from other living beings is their ability of think and analyze . However, there are common qualities between humans, some people are much more successful than others and become well-known in different field such as sports, music science and the like. Some people think that celebrities were born with a great talents and that's why they succeed . In contrast other people believe that any person can become a good sports person or artist or scientist. these two point of view will be discussed before a well-reasoned conclusion is found.

There is an agreement that famous and successful individuals are born with talent . If we read celebrities's biography we can conclude that this idea is not wrong because most of them were genius since they were a child .For example, Take Lione Messi, the best soccer player in Barcelona, Barcelona's managementdiscovered his talent and turned him into a fantastic player . In other words coaches of Barcelona discovered his talent in football that was in him. Furthermore, many singers have had a good voice since they were a child.(PLUS YOU CANNOT SAY THAT BECAUSE DUE TO PUBERTY THE VOICE IN MALE CHANGES )

On the other hand, it is claimed that talent and ability are acquisitive knowledge. In other words, the proponents of this idea believe that each human can reach to anything that he/she want. They look at humans as a amazing creations with great deal of skills. If we think a little more deeply we will understand this view is correct too. many scientist were people who left school because they were not capable students. For example,Thomas Alva Edison ,inventor and businessman who invented electric bulb,Albert Einstein,theoretical physicist and philosopher of science , and many other people . What made them scientists is the their inquisitive nature.

Personally, I believe that many singers and sports person are genius people, efforts and challenges with problems with aim of gaining success is much more important in every person's life. In my case, for example I used to go to Yoga course and I always though I can't do the exercises of Yoga ever because they were very difficult for me but after one year's efforts I learned how to do that.

To sum up,Every one is talented but in different aspects of life.It is more important to discover it.Each of us has a talent,We just need to discover it.Many successful people may or may not have talent But they work hard.

And We all know through the Law of Attraction that,There is nothing you cannot have in this world if you put your mind to it.

You need to connect things well,I did all I can but still You are far from being eloquent.

Undergraduate / My father always told me that Grades don't test my Intelligence [6]

I will first start off to help people on a smaller scale, donate clothes and food, and ask well educated people to educate the children and especially women in the families. I would like to have a contract with some hospitals to provide with free medical checkups, and search a lawyer and then go through every law in our country which might benefit the poor with government schemes. Help them to get some jobs and students some scholarships. Then I would take some help from the Non- Government Organization and ask them to follow my methods and bring about a change in their respective regions. I would have fund raisers and collection drive every 6 months to raise money and help me donate money to the people who need it and even make sure that these people's talents are showcased here for the people to hire them.

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Undergraduate / My father always told me that Grades don't test my Intelligence [6]

I grew up in a state in India where till 10th grade the power of memorization of a student is what is being evaluated, I had very different outlook on the topic of education. Mostly because my father always encouraged me to think outside the box and told me that Grades don't test my Intelligence, He kept telling me that the "The goal of true education is, Intelligence plus character.", Which is also why I was always so different than rest of the students at my school .I emphasized less on memorizing and more on understanding the concept of what was being taught.

But I was very inquisitive and that is why I always explored outside of my textbooks. My never ending curiosity has made me learn about several topics Psychology, Quantum Physics, Wonders of the Mind, Astrology, Literature, Fashion, Vibrations, Ancient Indian Medicine, and History of the world etc. My father being a very spiritual person always read me various stories which made me humanitarian to the core, which encouraged me to help people around me. I have conducted workshops for the poor and even donated food, clothes and money to them, taught them basic knowledge required about health care and math. Helped them to get common jobs rather than begging on the roads.

India is a place where 40% of population comprising 500 million is extremely poor. Such people don't get to afford 3 meals a day. And I would want to be the person to change that, but as Late Mr. Nelson Mandela said "Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world". I would like to pursue my education first and then help those 500 million people or more to end their excruciating pain of survival without hope.

Computer Science is been proven very effective to shape our future. Computer science is an integral part of our lives, shaping virtually everything from the objects around us to the ways in which we communicate, travel, work, and play. And the computer revolution has just begun - CS is now a key enabler for discovery and innovation in most other fields of endeavor, making it an incredibly relevant course of study.

The fact that I can invent the future by developing architectures and techniques for more advanced computing, it makes me feel alive and happy to be able to use my technical skills with creativity and vibrant ideas to use. CS being a powerful tool for making a positive difference in the world, I can't be happier than to use my skills to help people by understanding their needs and innovating as per the requirements of people. It's a field of unbounded potential - and I am more than ready to change the world!