Poetry / war is a devil | war could burn you like a flame | BANG! do you hear the gun, who do we blame? [4]

This is a poem about war i wanted for someone to check/add punctuation and help me improve this.

he in all my dreams i have thought
of thoughts who live don't
it's all about war and foe
let tpoppy blow and grow

war is a devil
war could burn you like a flame
BANG! do you hear the gun,who do we blame
look in front of you,look behind you
what do you see and hear?
i can see death,a word i hate to utter
i can see blood,bright and sticky
i can hear ear splitting shrieks of those who die

should we let the solders march to there doom and death
is it good to let them march upon the Valley of death?
let it stop before it turns into a game
a game which is lame.
victory a funny word,because solders dieing for war is not a victory,
i pity those who think victory could be won by using guns and war,
why not use peace and let i go

the stars are shining,
showing you the way,
will you follow it or will you stay away?
i know i would never walk that way,
unless it leads to peace and away from all the pain,
at the end what will you gain.