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Posts by WDantigua
Name: Wilson Diaz
Joined: Jan 29, 2015
Last Post: Feb 26, 2015
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From: United States of America
School: James monroe High school

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WDantigua   
Jan 29, 2015
Undergraduate / Where words or actions are not able to produce. Parsons The New School Artist Statement revision. [5]

What do you make, how do you make it, and why do you make? Ultimately, where do you visualize your creative abilities and academic study to take you after your education here at Parsons? (Maximum 500 words.)

Hi, id like to receive any opinions about this essay, id specially like to know any impressions or concerns about how the essay might come across as to the admissions team. this is a school i really want to get into so i might have tried too hard and now I'm worried that my essay might give a wrong impression to the admissions committee.

"What do you make, how do you make it, and why do you make? Ultimately, where do you visualize your creative abilities and academic study to take you after your education here at Parsons? (Maximum 500 words.)"

There are things neither words nor actions are able to produce. Art shows a visual elegance that's otherwise impossible to recreate by our own eyes. This is from where my ambition to understand art eradicates.

My artworks often aim for a visual representation of past experiences and my current emotions. I see the world with vibrancy and alertness, grasping snippets of the colorful reality that surrounds me. Whatever I observe that resonates to me I store it in my head. As I keep collecting moments, I find my mind blending and distorting them with other experiences. Incapable of keeping a hold of it all, I seek drawing and paintings to record and illustrate my mind's side effects on my observations. Likewise I resort to art in times of turmoil as it often brings tranquility and comfort to my everyday life.

I have grown an appeal for a variety of media like oil watercolor and charcoal. Charcoal is my primary go to. When not drawing in charcoal, I turn to oils to bring the sense of control and certainty that speaks to my character. Opposing that is watercolor's unpredictability to detach myself from my drive for perfectionism, as it can often become a vice. Swapping and integrating the media I work on into one another, as well as discovering new techniques and the history behind them often fascinates me.

Equally fascinating to me is the human body, as well as its relationship with uncanny events. The continuous push and pull between the true and the surreal has always inspired me. I draw from the ideal that a subject is always interacting and transitioning unconsciously towards unordinary things.

Although my resolve has always driven me, there's only so much I can learn and achieve on my own. The mere lack of proper guidance has halted my ability to do better. When drawing or painting I feel as if my work never truly portrays what my mind desires to convey. It seems as if I'm wandering aimlessly with no control over the outcome. Albeit truly discouraging at times, this only pushes me further into wanting to improve my skills and attain the results I'm truly looking for.

I sincerely believe that Parsons can provide me with the guidance to fully extend my potential and harness my creativity. A homelike sensation emanated from it on each of my visits. The more I researched about it, the more it strengthened my desire to begin my new academic journey alongside it. Although I am keen on learning various types of creative fields of study, I am drawn towards illustration. I know The New School can introduce me to the set of skills necessary to excel at the subject field, and once I complete my education there I can use my acquired knowledge to contribute my ideas to the discipline. I know I can be better with the right hand to guide me through. I am confident that this school is it.
WDantigua   
Feb 1, 2015
Undergraduate / Where words or actions are not able to produce. Parsons The New School Artist Statement revision. [5]

so are you suggesting i should kick the fancy words down a notch? and i also thought i clearly stated what art i did when i wrote,"so I often savor for a variety of mediums like oil watercolor and charcoal" how do you think would be a better way to make it more evident? as for why i chose to specialize in that art that part i had forgotten thank you for pointing that out
WDantigua   
Feb 26, 2015
Undergraduate / No two persons ever read the same book - TEXAS A&M topic A essay [2]

id like to start by asking if you can provide the essay instructions so me or anyone in the forum can better help you with it :). Here are some of the things i spotted on the first paragraph.

For me, perspective is the main key to see all issues in life not as a burden, but as a golden opportunity. Just like Chairul Tanjung , one of the most successful business me n in Indonesia this forms as a run-on sentence you must add something more to it or merge it with the first sentence by a coma . When the great economic recession hit my country, everyone started selling their possessions. Nonetheless, this man saw this great economic fall as a prospective chance to build his business and beat down the mainstream way of people see this mission impossible to a mission possiblewhat do you mean by this? . Chairul Tanjung inspired me not only as a person but also as a fighter. I believe by looking outside of popular opinion and into other more overlooked perspectives,i believe thats what you meannot easily jumping into a conclusion or a mainstream perspectivebut jump out of the problem and examines other perspective and details we can acquire a better view of a problem and not only to solve it, but also to use it for the greater good . i feel this should be changed
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