Scholarship / Not Going to Give Up - I gave it my all, and my honesty, whatever happens, happens. Scholarship [4]

Hi, Here are few mistakes that I have highlighted.
She was accepted to Penn with a full ride, but of course, she is breathtakingly smart and I am well, me. I had numerous fights with myself..You started with a past tense verb 'was' and then follow with a present tense verb 'am'.

the angel won, and here I am typing this essay.. same problem with this sentence 'angel won [...] and I was'
So, for the gazillionth..
My past experiences had pulled me into the slumps, really...Use simply 'experiences'
Every day after school, every weekend..

Research Papers / The impact of sunscreen - what it does after it goes into the ocean? [3]

Off Coral' by Ker Than, more than four thousands tons of sunscreen flow into the oceans every...It looks as though you have tried to make 'thousands' agree in number with the plural noun 'tons' that follows it. Simply make 'thousands' singular by removing the -s from the end: 'thousand'

people might consume alsowell . It is like a circle. People use the ...