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Name: Vidyalakshmi Venkatachalam
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Last Post: May 4, 2015
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School: t.v.s. higher secondary school

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vidya200675   
May 4, 2015
Writing Feedback / Excessive use of mobile phones and computers badly affects writing and reading skills [5]

Some people think that excessive use of mobile phones and computers badly affects writing and reading skills. Do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give your opinion.

Today's technological advances in information technology have many impacts in the budding society. While many are in favor of positive impacts such as improved intelligent quotient and connecting people, others indicate the negative impacts of overuse of these devices on creative skills on students. In my opinion, this is a normal effect of the current revolutionary technological era that we live in.

There are multifarious reasons in which these modern devices aid today's generation, teenagers in particular.
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vidya200675   
May 4, 2015
Letters / Waiter position - job application letter General Writing IELTS TASK 1 [4]

Just be careful about the sentence formation and generally no personal details are provided in the job application mail. Please practice writing by learning new words and grammatical structures.Hope this correction is of some help to you.
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