Writing Feedback / Technology is not an obstacle for a human being in thinking, and doesn't reduce intellectual skills [2]

Topic As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

In the given issue task, writer's suggesting that humans are more dependent on technologies rather than their ability to think. I disagree with the writer view with the following reasons.

Technology is not a obstacle for a human being to think and decrease the intellectual skill. But it solves many big problem which is almost impossible to do with out technology. And save enormous time. It also opens an envelope to think out of box. I feel technologies develop more human intellectual skill. For instance suppose someone wants to travel from one place to other for delivering message then he can do it in minimal time with technology compare to without use of technology.

It has been seen that in world war -2, it was very difficult for British to decipher the German code "Enigma", then Allen Turing has developed a machine which could done it in very small time and was able to save millions of life.

Humans learn with technology. For example in academic and industry research. Scientist develop a technology to predict some specific type of problem. Then they use to solve many similar problem to verify the limit of that technology. After that they solve many other problem and learn the behavior of those problem. Such as, in automotive industries engineers try to find out effect of air on the car body with certain computation technologies. After study, they do respective changes on car body to minimize air effect. This help them to save huge amount of fuel. Moreover, in academic, student try to learn the effect and behavior of those problem which develop their mental and imagination skill to judge those results.

On the other hand, technology makes life easy and open a new scope to think and develop. In the area of defense, where you must be full of information about your enemy in order to save countrymen. If technology such as Radar, Sonar would not have been developed then it would be almost impossible to track enemies moves.

Technology create a stair to climbs on the next level of technology. For instance, from wire connection to wireless connection, airplane to seaplane and drone. These are the best technology development from basic to advance.

Thus, in the above example it is quite clear that technologies never put constrain on human mind, but it shows new way of thinking. It make humans to think advance than current technology.

Writing Feedback / It is more beneficial to complete independent study than to attend college. [2]

It has been a quite a debatable topic for many scholar student that they should not attend college and do study independently. It is suggesting in the topic that one should complete his study himself. I disagree with suggested with following reasons.

First, if one can learn without the college then it will be always beneficial in many ways, such as time, money, and quality. There are many great scholar who has not attended any college and made it to big, such as Ernestine, Edition, but in the contemporary word, it is very difficult to proof your knowledge without degree until and unless you have discover or develop some new theory.

In addition, college provides a favorable environment for study with elite professors, erudite students, who shows path to do something innovative in respective field. For a student, it is always required to have a favorable condition. In many cases, it has seen that student learn more by seeing other students, and made big in the world. One can get better company in the college to discuss the relevant subject and will get to know other new knowledge about his field of study. To getting such facility in independent study is very difficult if you are not an extraordinary.

Similarly, college are not only for bookish knowledge, but it provides several extracurricular activities such as music, sports, dance and similar many field. Some student shapes their career in thease mentions field except having college degree. College dwells opportunity to meet new people where one can learn team work, dealing with pressure, strategy in handling big projects.

Furthermore, college gets a platform to represent your work. If someone has done some relevant work in the particular field without college name and wants to present it, then he will face many difficulties whereas a student with college tag can do it easily. Modern time is quite difficult if you do not have a college name because it is quite difficult to judge someone based on knowledge in just seeing, but with college name, one can have picture of student based on his college reputation.

In conclusion, as in the above paragraph, it is clear that college is always beneficial in terms of mental, physical, and cultural development, whereas in independent study, one can not develop all together.