Writing Feedback / Advantage of mass communication in the 21st century [2]

Hi Ravindra,
As a novice editor, here is some advice.

Today we are living in the 21st century. It will not be exaggerated to say that media has influenced every aspect of our life. Due to the advancement in technology various means of mass media is coming into existence.

Living in the 21st century, it would not be an exaggeration to state that media influences every aspect of our life. Advances in technology, has resulted in a pervasive mass media, accessible to almost everyone.

For starters...
Good luck!