Writing Feedback / Parents should care about their children's education - challenging point [4]

Hi Vahid,

I like your question as well as essay. Parents should care about their children. not only in the case of education. They should know how their child growing everyday and what they learned so far. Good keep writing.

Writing Feedback / SAT Essay: Are creativity and originality necessary for success? [3]


Of course, we need both creativity as well as originality while doing every work. Essay is good, but you could have improve little. Good. Keep doing :)

Writing Feedback / Without parents assistance children can easily be affected by bad habits, lifestyle and cultures [6]

Most of the cases it is true. But there are some exceptional cases. Some children will follow better lifestyle and habits without any assistance. Parents are the role model of every child. If the base is perfect then everything will automatically become perfect.

Writing Feedback / Books are more significant than experience, but we can't live apart from it. [4]

I think experience is the better source to get knowledge than any other source. Because books are just collection of words. We can simply write. But it is not that much easy to prove. We always remember the things that we experienced than we read.